Talk:Road to Kebnegard, Chapter Twenty-Nine

tcm: Done!

ET: Don't you think it's at all important that we didn't know Maka Ripo was there, hiding on the side of the giants and that he couldn't help his nature and attacked them from behind? Right now, it looks like he suddenly appeared with the party. Also, Nenufar says "All right, this is it, then."

tcm: Done again!

ET: Also, Nic was very careful to make no promises to play with the red green girls. The ring was strictly as apology. And he and Nenufar burned the troll with a flask of oil. (I think I'm done correcting.)

tcm: Done again! (I've also added the bit about Nenufar stealing my gem.)